The line graph shows the channel one news viewing figures per day on one year
The line graph illustrates the average daily viewers per day on the distinct news channel on each month.
Overall, it is clear from the line graph that the 6 PM news experienced fluctuation and 11pm news remain stable throughout the year. Whereas ,in 1st may 11pm news channel was launched.
1pm news was introduced in January with approximately 5 million viewer, which was highest proportion compared to other.however, the number of audience considerably fluctuated in every month, but at end of year it reached only just above 3 million viewers. Meanwhile, 11 PM news channel's viewer slightly rose in december from around 1 2 million viewer at the beginning.
In August,spectators sharply went down to nearly 1 million viewers from nearly 4 million viewer in may,which channel was started with about 3 million audience in January.
Even though, at the beginning of 11pm news channel there was only under 0.5 million viewer, it increased sharply with just above 4 million viewer in August. But after August, it decline slowly and lastly reached close to 1 million watcher at end of year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...news remain stable throughout the year. Whereas ,in 1st may 11pm news channel was launc...
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...main stable throughout the year. Whereas ,in 1st may 11pm news channel was launche...
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Suggestion: was the highest
...h approximately 5 million viewer, which was highest proportion compared to other.however, t...
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Suggestion:
... viewers. Meanwhile, 11 PM news channels viewer slightly rose in december from ar...
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... december from around 1 2 million viewer at the beginning. In August,specta...
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Suggestion: , spectators
...iewer at the beginning. In August,spectators sharply went down to nearly 1 million v...
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...wers from nearly 4 million viewer in may,which channel was started with about 3 milli...
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... viewer in may,which channel was started with about 3 million audience in January...
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Suggestion:
...sharply with just above 4 million viewer in August. But after August, it decline ...
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Message: Did you mean 'declines'?
Suggestion: declines
...viewer in August. But after August, it decline slowly and lastly reached close to 1 mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, lastly, may, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11049723757 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8176578918 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1083126611 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169504445306 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103501257713 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863576556112 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131706513666 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994166190795 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.