The line graph illustrates the various mean of communication services in the worldwide used by the many people from 1998 to 2008.
The landline services remain constant from 1998 to 2006 that was 15 per 100 inhabitants and again declined to less than 12 per 100 inhabitants.In the initial year,the cell phone user arise slowly till 2006 that was 40 per 100 inhabitants and again climbed up to 60 per 100 inhabitants in 2008.Internet service started at around 5 per 100 inhabitant and grew up slightly in the end of year that was 20 per 100 inhabitants .Both the mobile broadband and fixed broadband in 1998 has 0 per 100 inhabitants.They both increased over the remaining years that was 5 per 100 inhabitant.
overall,cell phone and internet user has the highest amount of units and become more popular.whereas,other services minimal growth over the year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21380005639 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.520815556 43.030603864 482% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.0 112.824112599 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 22.9334400587 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310192854707 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180552447927 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105439271056 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180552447927 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105439271056 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.2329268293 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 10.3012195122 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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