The line graph compares the proportion of population in a decade from 1950 to 2050 in New Zealand.
It is clear that people in 35-64 years old and over 65 have an upward trend while it is opposite trend for two others age. In addition, the percentage of 35-64 aged people was predicted to the most in 2050.
In 1950, there was 32% of New Zealand’s resident were in 15-34 aged which was followed by the figure of children from 0 to 14 aged. After one hundred years, the proportion of 0-14 group will be decreased generally to 10% in 2050, whereas the number of 15-34 aged reach a peak at 45% in 1990 then will be fluctuated to 28%.
Turning to two other populations, the number of New Zealand’s resident in 35-64 aged was 15% and 10%, respectively in 1950. There will be a significant increase in the figure of 35-64 group people to the highest percentage at near 35% of population. The amount of over 65 years old resident also will be rose slightly to 20% in 2050.
- Films were produced by big companies in the past but today people are able to make a film Do you think this trend is positive or negative 73
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 81
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 56
- Task 1 The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010 2012 and 2014
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5144704668 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2972038263 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259807533829 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144186950761 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187916673458 0.0843802449381 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230051620766 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.226915435477 0.0819641961636 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.