The line graph compares the proportion of population in a decade from 1950 to 2050 in New Zealand.
It is clear that people in 35-64 years old and over 65 have an upward trend while it is opposite trend for two others age. In addition, the percentage of 35-64 aged people was predicted to the most in 2050.
In 1950, there was 32% of New Zealand’s resident were in 15-34 aged which was followed by the figure of children from 0 to 14 aged. After one hundred years, the proportion of 0-14 group will be decreased generally to 10% in 2050, whereas the number of 15-34 aged reach a peak at 45% in 1990 then will be fluctuated to 28%.
Turning to two other populations, the number of New Zealand’s resident in 35-64 aged was 15% and 10%, respectively in 1950. There will be a significant increase in the figure of 35-64 group people to the highest percentage at near 35% of population. The amount of over 65 years old resident also will be rose slightly to 20% in 2050.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5144704668 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2972038263 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259807533829 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144186950761 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187916673458 0.0843802449381 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230051620766 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.226915435477 0.0819641961636 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.