The two maps illustrate some change of the way accessed to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that the main differences involve the upgrade of bus facilities and parking space and addition of two roundabouts.
From 2007 to 2010, the most striking change is the redeveloped of road access to the hospital with two new roundabouts. The first one at the three-way junction of hospital road and Ring road which is surround the hospital while the second one place at the four-way intersection of hospital road and city road.
Looking at other features, we could see that six bus stops along two sides of hospital road were redeveloped to a bus station in 2010. Additionally, in the east of this road, the car park for both public and staff was made into two parking space with one new in the east side of the city hospital for only public car.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'surrounded'.
Suggestion: surrounded
...of hospital road and Ring road which is surround the hospital while the second one place...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59090909091 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50488643723 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.363736135 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276261670453 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155536779497 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816516937866 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182329989522 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898131485096 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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