The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the data for the worldwide willingness to consume insect-based products and the current price for certain food available on the marketplace.
Overall it can be seen that the countries highlighted in Green are the major consumers then comes the Orange with moderate and finally nations highlighted in Red are least interested.
On the first hand, people of Mexico are more inclined towards insect-based products than any other state in the world with 71%. Whereas, Peru and Thailand are just behind Mexico with 58% and 56% respectively.
On the other hand, China, South Africa, and Brazil both countries are both moderately interested in eating insect-based products, with numbers stating 44%,38%, and 43%. Finally, Countries like India, the USA, Russia, Australia, the UK, Spain have the least desire to eat insect-based products, and also the numbers do not exceed 35%.
So it can be concluded that The will towards such food depends on people's personal choices and their eating pattern according to their habitat and way of living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Spain) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33136094675 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72434929091 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1869538789 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154900155735 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769590253138 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128890298363 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10029273224 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145718078978 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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