The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture with the map demonstrates the global willingness to eat insect products and chart below shows the current price for certain food available on the market place.
Generally, insects are popular food to many citizens around the world and Asia is the continent with the majority of interest in this particular product. Looking onto the price chart, bugs are more expensive compared to other kinds of food like chicken, pork or rice in the market nowadays.
As clearly seen, Thailand is the country which holds the biggest proportion of insect consuming among its population. In addition, up to 71% of Mexican eat insect products, as a result, it is the country that has the highest willingness in using these types of food. While most countries in Africa don't consume many insects, South Africa has an outstanding number of such willingness of 39%.
Moving onto the cost for food, weaver ant which raised naturally in the wild can be sold at the highest price in the chart, 10.65 USD per kilogram. It is also obvious that rice is the cheapest item since it could be purchased at only 0.78 USD/kg. As can be inferred from the chart, grown house cricket worth as much as beef at approximately 3 USD per kilogram.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...of food. While most countries in Africa dont consume many insects, South Africa has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8009478673 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51078400056 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6663817645 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.555555556 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277762608772 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112659556691 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173634578762 0.0843802449381 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209635200867 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221467518399 0.0819641961636 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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