The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps illustrate how a small town called Lslip changes before and after the development.
Overall, there are many changes after the development project. The roads will be expanded, many types of facilities will be added and replaced.
First of all, the roads will be constructed to circle the district and be widened from one lane to dual carriageway. In addition, the main road will be divided the district into two part: the north part and south part, and is only used for pedestrians, not for vehicles.
In the south part, park area will be shrunk to about a third of the original area. Furthermore, one of the current housing will be relocated to outside of the district, and two new housing will be added: one will be next to the park and the other will locate the upper right corner of the district which is connected by a road. The shops will remain in the current site. In the north part of the district, there will a few facilities be constructed to replace the shops. The shopping center located in the middle of the area, the car park is on the right of the shopping center, and the bus station is on the left of the shopping center and connected by road.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, third, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52803738318 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44120754525 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476635514019 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7459785858 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0767300287535 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395433679123 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767167521779 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809376404219 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100229323996 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.