The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate the layout of the Islip town centre as well as the plan for its development in the future.
A cursory at the diagrams is enough to make it clear that the shop chain located in the centre of this town will remain the same in the future. Another thing to add is that the dual roadway will be built up surrounding this town.
According to the diagrams, towards the north of this town, the shop chain will be demolished to make way for the bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing area. Besides, the main road lying nearby will be replaced by the road for pedestrians only. Moreover, the part situated in the southeast of this town is planned to reduce in size in the future. Adjacent to this park, new housing will be constructed. Finally, the school positioning in the southwest of this town will stay unchanged in the future with some inconsiderable change in size.
Overall, the Islip town centre will witness a dramatic transformation in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, moreover, so, well, another thing, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56523699029 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548571428571 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4559120695 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211810356046 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109860708884 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136043449513 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200159361184 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161880554474 0.0819641961636 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.