The two diagrams show changes to the centre of Islip town; how it looks like now and how it would be in the future. The most obvious change is that the size of centre and it's built-up portion will be increased while the share of greenery including park and countryside will be reduced.
The main road is surrounded by shops will be replaced by a walkway. Giving access park to the school as well as eastern and western parts of the centre, a dual carriageway will be built as a ring round around the centre. However, the dual carriageway will occupy more than half of current area of the park as well as countryside on the northern side. A small area of the school also will be trimmed by the new way.
In addition, other developments will be made. The shops on the northern side of the main road will be replaced by a shopping centre with a car park immediately to the right and a bus station to the left. Further developments include new housing next to the park, and another one will be housed in the place of current shops at the eastern side. Current housings will be shifted accordingly toward the left and the right to shape a zigzag figure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ark and countryside will be reduced. The main road is surrounded by shops will b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, look, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42253521127 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41127235897 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2141965832 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0729622123954 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345725723601 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607689505628 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652612601055 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710375010779 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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