The rules that today’s societies expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
There is a major controversy in society involving how much young people could tolerate rigorous rules and new etiquette. Some people believe that nowadays young people bear more pressure to follow the rules than they did in the past, however there are some others who hold the opinion that the rules considered as proper behavior are less strict than they were before. As far as I am concerned, the etiquette in society are dramatically increasing while they are far stricter than before because not only does society demand to coin new proper behaviors to meet nowadays’ circumstances, but also parents are wiser and more knowledgeable than they were before.
The first subtle point which deserves some words here is that the society expects more proper behavior nowadays. The early aim of every society is prosperity of the civilians. In a typical society, the political power is handed periodically between different parties. Every empowered party will immediately set off reforming old rules. Unfortunately, in most cases, the amendments affect young generations’ life style more than elder ones. As evidence, in a typical religious country, once the right wing takes the power will set off immediately vast cultural amendment. This means a curse for the young countrymen. Because government begins to band specific actions such as strictly forbidding a sort of hair style or even a cloth brand which it was abundant beforehand. Unfortunately, so far progressive information technology makes it far convenient nowadays for governments to monitor and control the behavior of society members than before. Thus, nations should follow and obey that kind of stupid rules.
The second reason which should be mentioned here is that parents are more knowledgeable and well-informed than they were before. Since illiterate people are diminishing day to day, a great number of parents are educated even highly educated today. They consciously devote their sums and time for their children’s prosperity. They have a clear brilliant goal in their mind which helps them during bringing their children up. Therefore, they detect the available risky behaviors which they could harm or endanger their children’s success. In order to avoid risky behaviors or delinquency of the youngsters, they inevitably have to hinder some behaviors by introducing additional rules. For example, every child likes the electronic gadgets such as a tablet or XBOX. In layman’s term, gaming is beneficial for children to develop their handy skills or their concentration, while a learned parent is well-aware of too much spending time for playing with gadgets and its harmful consequences. Therefore, he or she puts a rigorous rule in order to control the time or the containing of the game. It seems cruel toward a young man to inhibit him from having an enjoyable time .
In recapitulation, the more knowledgeable parents and more coined etiquette are two major factor do force more pressure on young countrymen. It is a fairly well-known fact in society that young people always bear the burden of social and cultural amendments. In other words, they are young people who always needed to obey rigorous or even idiot rules.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229390681004 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.148745519713 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.139784946237 0.0866891130778 161% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0770609318996 0.046263068375 167% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0501792114695 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10394265233 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0268817204301 0.0351676179071 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85512183492 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215053763441 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00358422939068 0.00188951952338 190% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0824372759857 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010752688172 0.0209618222197 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143369175627 0.0139019557991 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3216.0 2387.08602151 135% => OK
No of words: 514.0 408.028673835 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25680933852 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371595330739 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272373540856 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200389105058 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142023346304 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85512183492 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531128404669 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 64.6517098376 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7692307692 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0700934127 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.653846153846 0.644075263715 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.0065848548 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.30519480519 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348094994655 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107228986968 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0884605617106 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.412094234936 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141971753731 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105567424766 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763305657399 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307442410366 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0203870519321 0.067059652881 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246623018796 0.210909579961 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485189795853 0.0618886996521 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.86379928315 362% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.4623655914 447% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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