The two pictures illustrate a backward resort, which transformations into developing for tourists.
Looking at these diagrams it is immediately obvious that this is a small resort to the north of the beach, and a branch river flows between the land divides into two similar part, the right and the left. In term of traffic, there are two main roads running from the east to the west with across the bridges of the river. Over more a decade starting in 1990, the resort witnessed dramatic growth in the development of the residential area and industrial zone, furthermore, the change, both in addition to transportation routes and new vehicle during this period.
About the left, there are a number of changes. Firstly, both the left beach and around the lake, the small houses were demolished and the disappearance of the trees, instead of new inhabited areas with a range of tower buildings. The next, the construction of the commercial zone with a modern supermarket in the center would probably provide more convenient. Finally, there wasn’t any space between two main roads, where many flats were constructed.
At the right, it has the appropriate plans in here. All things in the right seaside were destroyed and as soon as, a large factory was showed up, undoubtable, that was a signal in extensive growth. Besides, the important structures still remained, such as school and hospital.
It is worth mentioning that the local transport increased significantly, the establishments of an airport in the corner of the right, nearby the old school and a ferry at the secluded southern location of coastline take this place up a top-notch, which was more likely to travel and trade.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, still, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02846975089 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85596445566 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4802655134 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112376969591 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034121182193 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315934096477 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551053645958 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250006546824 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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