The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site

This report derives from two diagrams delineating the layout of a commercial area at the east of Norbiton and its planned redevelopment blueprint.

Broadly speaking, The renovation plan aims to convert the industrial area into a residential neighborhood and establish various supporting facilities such as school, medical center etc.

In the planned development layout, all the factories will be removed from the site. Shops around the central roundabout as well as a medical center at the southeast side of it will be constructed. The eastern road of the map will have housing on either side of the road and a school at the end of it. A playground will also be noticed nearby. At the junction of the two highways a small traffic circle will be established.

On the other hand, two new openings will be added to the central traffic circle. One will lead to new homes at the northwest while the other will go pass a newly established bridge to connect with a brand-new highway and residence along with it. As a result, the countryside on the north will only remain at the east.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all traffic circle will be established. On the other hand, two new openings will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, broadly speaking, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79834448854 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1652638125 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100142739463 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427310356014 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059150590778 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735888035539 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467828218454 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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