‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Success and failure are well connected without disappointment there is no pleasure in achievement. Many people tend to believe that defeat only occurred when there was a lack of desire. This essay disagrees with this perspective. In order to triumph a strong desire may not be enough always as luck plays its part sometimes. A proper method or planned blueprint is also a must to reach greatness.
In this globalized world, it is very easy to witness achievements of others. All of us run after success but only a few can have the taste of it. However, this does not mean that others lack desire since everyone requires their fair share of fortune to succeed. This may lead someone else to be successful somewhere else. To cite an example, Although, every year during the admission time of BUET many show unbelievable wisdom, only a certain number of students have the fate. That does not mean others collapse in life they shine in other stages just not there.
Inspite of having hunger and luck, a planned approach is always needed. One can put maximum effort and not reach the limit he wants if the approach is wrong. Furthermore, a successful outcome always require a proper blueprint to follow. For instance, according to all great men, they overtook all competitors due to their tactical steps which lacked among others. In addition, a smart plan towards is a crucial ingredient for greatness.
In this competitive world it is quite common to fail despite having gigantic ambitions. Every great man requires their luck to flourish and an effective plan to pursue success. Therefore, it is not necessary that the root cause of failure is only the lacking of desire.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...r method or planned blueprint is also a must to reach greatness. In this globalized...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89122807018 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61205859577 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0806585529 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3684210526 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0674289055865 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021677478999 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276917731959 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435571844254 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263739033242 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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