The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Submitted by Manzura on Tue, 02/09/2021 - 14:31

The maps illustrate ingormayon about how Stokeford village has developed over 80 year period from 1930 to 2010.
Overall, there have been several changes, being the most noticiable increases in accomadation, the eliminating farmland in 2010. Also, it is obvious from the maps, there is no altertion on main road.
In 1930, to the south west and north east of village where the farmland located, and fed cows. Moreover, road run through Stokeford from north to south. West side of road mainly primary school and gardens were situated and there was farmland next to primary school. On the west side of road, there was running river which was called River Stoke, and additionally farmland , the post office were located west side of road and there were also shops and large houses near it.
Turning to the 2010 year map, it can be seen that, gardens and big houses were removed and were replaced them with retirement apartments. The post office remained and noticiable thing that new houses were built along the road. New roads were created beside main road in order to reach some area. Although, the old building of primary school reamined, new ones were buit near its sides.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27128459131 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7729090905 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7272727273 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109249509179 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509370455213 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547435916512 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867087723923 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586948275036 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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