There is awidespread opinion that the advance of electronic gadgets and the internet, less people buy paper-based books and newspapers in forthcoming. Also, with high quality of world-wide-web and the internet, probably, printed books and magazines will eliminate gradually year by year. I partly agree with this notion with following reasons.
Firstly, it is true that, not all recourse of internet are trustworthy and we can not rely on them at every time. Furtheremore, some people especially elder people prefer to read printed newspapers and they are comfortable.
Another pointto consider is that, a wide range of information and sources, people can find necessary information without any patment, any difficulties and they can store them for future use. Additionally, if people use digital device ti store information, the materials occupy little space then paper-based materials. Moreover, using internet aids to find materials and information more easily and more fast. The most noticiable side getting online information using by gadgets is that,there are not payment of using it in most cases.
To sum up, both printed recourse and online materials have their own position in society. However, in the next future, with most possibility, paper-based materials will no longer used and they will be repleced by online marerials with lots of benefits. Personally, I think digitized materials are more beneficial in most cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, i think, in most cases, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47297297297 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95982966955 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7607693971 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198607076644 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691157554253 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675793756406 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122647853353 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056843476636 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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