The maps below shows changes that took place in youngsville in new zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.
The map illustrates the change states of youngsville in new zealand in the years of 1980 and 2005.
To the north,there were a lot of trees to the western part in 1980,but by 2005,most of them were cut down.Also all houses,located by the sea,were removed to make a room for stadıum and new car parks in 2005.In addition there were a few activities in 1980 on the lake,but by 2005,a lot of new activities had been added.But the hospital had been remained untouched.The youngsville state were separated by the rıver alananah.
To the south,there were a lot of houses to the southern in 1980,but by 2005, all of them had been removed to make a room for skyscappers,factories,ware houses.Similarly,all trees,located to the eastern, had been cut down in 2005.Also new marina had been contsructed jut over the railway station in 2005.But airport,school and park area remained untouched in 2005.
Overall ıt is clear that the youngsville town changed to significant extent by 2005.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0736196319 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59780253356 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.899272399 43.030603864 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.75 112.824112599 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 22.9334400587 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229428223057 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215728349958 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150189176612 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215728349958 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150189176612 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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