MRT around the world

Essay topics:

MRT around the world

A glance table presented reveals information of mass transportation built in some major cities over

the world. Building over one hundred length of transportation system in the nineteenth century,

London was the trailblazer city providing vast route system with more than 500-millions commuters a

year.

In the same centuries, Paris developed into urban place, same as London, owing to installing 594-m

metro systems that was able to carry almost nine-hundred people. Other developed countries such as

Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto subsequently initiated devising mass transportation in the

twentieth century which had total length of 149 km, 114 km, and 11 km, respectively. Of the cities

around the world, Tokyo had the most sized system since it afford to transport nearly 1434 millions

people across the city whereas Kyoto had the least with only eleven millions passengers per year.

Furthermore, it is an intriguing fact that development of transportation system in Los Angles, which

had the capacity of 90 millions people a year, was recently completed in 2001 with 14-km length of

MRT - stands for mass rapid transit.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, whereas, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51123595506 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9521637927 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4996653266 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.5 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980160477816 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455852843368 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493358246883 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0371596452199 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678003970922 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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