Effect of Internet
Technology used by human nowadays has rapidly changed, especially internet. Rocket science
innovation has been implemented on internet in the past years to provide all of human needs,
starting from free information, simplicity of ordering things, and even unlimited entertainment.
Nevertheless, internet today bring about both positive and negative effect to whom use it.
Internet has good impact applied on our daily activities. For instance, some people recently use
internet to buy or sell not only their goods or foods, but also their skills and information to everyone
over the world. Many have proven that using internet can markedly escalate their earnings in the nick
of time due to its global connection and networking. In addition, internet based knowledge sharing,
so-called online teaching, is seemingly to be the best way for students and teachers taking on their
study and daily lesson. Therefore, our activities have been revamped more positively by how we
currently use internet.
On the contrary, spreading fake news, committing frauds and scams and ‘black market’ shopping are
the another consequences of using internet. There are people who irresponsibly conduct such harm
thing on the internet - known as cyber crime. Strict and firm regulation implemented by government
to utilisation of internet, however, have continuously been updated and appropriated to handle those
problem so that internet is most likely to be used more safely.
As a conclusion, I really believe that internet infers plenty of advantages for us instead of
disadvantages as it makes people doing all their works more comfortably and efficiently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 96, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...been updated and appropriated to handle those problem so that internet is most likely to be u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61811023622 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99240612638 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685039370079 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1215191697 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362732850296 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132515796405 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584750620917 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11003843362 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834242073373 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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