The number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010 2012 and 2014

Essay topics:

The number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The given chart provides the information on the quantity of vehicles registered in Australia in three years, 2010, 2012 and 2014.

It is clear that passenger vehicle was the most popular area of vehicles among six types during this period while the opposite was true for light trucks. In addition, the biggest change was witnessed in motorcycles.

As can be seen from the table that despite occupying a huge number of vehicles registered compared to other transport systems, passenger vehicles steadily increased from 11,000,000 in 2010 to 13,000,000 in 2014. Having an equivalent percentage change with it, commercial vehicles significantly elevated by 300,000 people registered in 2012, followed by a slight rise to 2,700,000 in 2014.

Looking at the chart in more detail, notwithstanding the fact that the numbers of people choosing motorcycles and light trucks were smaller, the percentage changes of them were considerable, with 30,7 percent and 23,5 percent, respectively. On the other side, heavy trucks’ figure stabilized in the first period, after a sharp climb to 423,000 in 2014.

 

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er a sharp climb to 423,000 in 2014.  
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88957055215 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5230538763 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9499251725 43.030603864 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.0 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358198842348 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17322808575 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156063400807 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221442885834 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171292754276 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 11.4140731707 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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