Oil Production Capacity from 1990 to 2010

Essay topics:

Oil Production Capacity from 1990 to 2010

The graphs display the number of oil production in several countries from 1990 to 2010. Interestingly though, it is measured in million barrels per day. At first glance, it was evident that the highest rise reached by Saudi Arabia while the lowest one was Qatar over the period of time.
Moving to a more detailed analysis concerning to Saudi Arabia, Iran, and Iraq, the biggest increase was around 6 million barrels from 1990 to 2010 which the higest growth was between 2000 and 2005. Next, Iran and Iraq had similar rise, it was approximately 2 millions barrels that was increased steadily from year to year started from 2 to 4 millions barrels for Iraq and 3 to over 4 for Iran.
Turning to the other’s data, almost 4 millions barrels gained by Kuwait and UAE which was started under 2 and more than 2 (Kuwait and UAE, respectively) and UAE achieved identic number for the first ten years. Finally, Qatar was counted remain constant until the end of the year, approximately 1 million barrels per day.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...Interestingly though, it is measured in million barrels per day. At first glance, it wa...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...while the lowest one was Qatar over the period of time. Moving to a more detailed analysis co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s data, almost 4 millions barrels gained by Kuwait and UAE which was started unde...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pproximately 1 million barrels per day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46962434825 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3420760046 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154470218941 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10019071367 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167086064322 0.0843802449381 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117662464267 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093679975839 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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