Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is convienced that a few people believed that the young time is the happiest years for them while others think that the older life makes it happier. Personally, I am on the same page that juvenil lives are the best time to be happiest.
In the one hand, it is a common reason that the young time is the good period to be happy. During this time, many children could do something that make them glad and in its time, they did not have some great resposibility so they could enjoy their lives. For the model, when people was younger or in the childhood era, many people felt did not have task for anything, they just played with their friends or spent their money for buying some foods without thinking so much. It means, the happiest time is when we do not have some huge responsibilities in our lives and it happen when every single person was child.
Nevertheless, there are several disadvantages to regard the adult life is the best time to be happy. Firstly, many older people do not want to be workaholic and they just want to make parties in every single time that they have. It is because they assume that it is the best time to be pleased so they do not have time to think seriously about their lives. For example, several inhabitants in the big city just go to club to spend their money in every weekend that they have especially after they got the salaries form their work places. As the result, they do not think harder for preparing their lives for the future so they have a messy life. Secondly, many married couples get divorced because they could not maintain their lives properly. It is caused by both of them are only thinking to having fun with their own lives so they could not keep their emosions. As proof, in a big country, lots of married couples prefer to get divorced because both or one of them could not be maturer for creating the good atmosphere in their home and they always go to outside to looking for happiness with their friends . So, this decision to be happy in older life brings few bad impacts if it is over.
To sum up where my track, it is evidence that human has the time to be happy while they could manage it appropriately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40547263682 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25783545317 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455223880597 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7424430234 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141886704111 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638142334209 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584560884109 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114474405704 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067057331896 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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