he line graph illustrates the amount of oil consumed per day between 2009 and 2030 in four different areas.
Overall, from 2015, oil consumption in the US and also in Western Europe and Japan is forecast to decline, in contrast to the expected increase in China and the Middle East. The US will remain the major consumer throughout the period.
In 2009, in the US the number of barrels of oil used daily came up to 10 billion. The figures were considerably lower for Western Europe and Japan at around 4 billion, and China and Middle East at 2 billion barrels each. While the consumption went down in Western Europe and Japan by 2015 and reached a peak in the US, there was an increase in oil consumption in China and Middle East.
By 2030, the number of barrels of oil consumed daily in the US is predicted to drop to about 4 billion, while consumption is expected to decrease to 2 billion barrels in Western Europe and Japan. By contrast, in the Middle East, a rise in the amount of oil consumed is anticipated to reach a peak of 3 million barrels in 2030. This is slightly lower than the estimated figure in China.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
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Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'lines'.
Suggestion: lines
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49756097561 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49730372151 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478048780488 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.966759982 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238150060844 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110258686232 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791008805748 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15305695822 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319143773475 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.