The percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

Essay topics:

The percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

The bar chart compares the proportion of British people donating money to charity with various age groups over a period of 20 years.

It is clear that the proportion of age groups with 51-65 and over 65 have increased between 1990 and 2010. By contrast, it is interesting to note that level for 18-25, 26-35 and 35-50 has gone down over the given period shown.

Looking at the bar chart in more detail, the percentage for the two oldest age groups with 51-65 and over 65 years stood at 35% and approximately 32% respectively and these figures have increased to 39% and 35% accordingly in 2010.

It could be explained by the fact that the proportion for the 18-25, 26-35 and 35-50 age groups were 17%, 30%, and 42% respectively in 1990. Comparing with the other two age groups 18-25 age group experienced a 10 % decrease in which these figures were 5 and 7 for the 26-35 and 35-50 age groups accordingly.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, look

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51452927314 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1639675228 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218893528175 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119691235911 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534612647992 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145223776078 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416714246344 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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