Some businesses face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack some interpersonal skills such as the ability to work in a team. What do you think is the main cause of the problem. How can it be resolved?
It is true that the beginner laborers may devoid of some interpersonal abilities and some companies may encounter with this kind of drawbacks. Although there will unquestionably be some prime causes of this trend, measures could certainly taken to mitigate these potential problems.
As the problems could experience within the company due to the lack of some work-related skills in new employees, several related causes and effects can be anticipated. First and foremost, it could be argued that university lectures mainly focused on more theoretical classes than practical could possibly lead students to have less knowledge regarding the work environment. It would appear that most of the lectures provided by collages are theoretical oriented and most of them are obligatory in this case the students most likely to have less information and knowledge on how to act in the group as a member of the team. Another important reason could be thought that the excess amount of classes would probably unable students to work in some company during their university years. As a result of this fact, students only possess theoretical knowledge rather than practical and they do know how to put into practice/implement/perform their knowledge when they commence their career.
There are several actions that not only university administrators but also students themselves could take to resolve the problems depicted above. Initially granted, it could be asserted that university classes and subjects should definitely concentrate more on practical classes and decrease the amount of theoretical and unrelated subjects to their profession so as to improve students’ practical skills. Another measure could be considered that students could compel? themselves to work a part-time job during university years and carry work and study simultaneously. This will allow them to experience a work environment prior to starting their main career.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as a lack of experience and interpersonal skills of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, regarding, so, as to, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49382716049 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14681646974 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3607358396 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.923076923 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240717935383 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092259800054 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649813895595 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158203778542 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352158952378 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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