the percentage of daily consumption of fruits and vegetable by UK people in three different yearsThe graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Essay topics:

the percentage of daily consumption of fruits and vegetable by UK people in three different yearsThe graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The line chart represents how much amount of waste was produced by three companies over 15 years from 2000 to 2015.

Overall, company A had the largest amount of waste production in 2000, which was followed by company B and C. When company C slightly raised its waste production in 2005, company A and B slightly reduced over time.

In 2000, company A caused the production of 12 tones waste, but it started constantly reducing over the period and reached 3 tones of waste production in 2015. In contrast, company A steeply increased its waste from 8 tones to 10 tones within five years, however, it sharply reduced to 3 tones between 2005 and 2015. Even though the manufacturing company C had only 3 tones of waste after the production in 2000, which slightly rose 7 tomes within 10 years and, there after from 2010 to 2015 dramatically grew its production to 10 tones withing 5 years.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pany A caused the production of 12 tones waste, but it started constantly reducin...
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Line 11, column 464, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...ghtly rose 7 tomes within 10 years and, there after from 2010 to 2015 dramatically grew its...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73248407643 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57413114707 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528662420382 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6204145337 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182986054147 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118366478699 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653583118414 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164637588443 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668854355261 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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