The given picture illustrates the amount of people with mini computer who gain access to varieties of features in 3 different period:2006, 2008 and 2010 respectively. Overall, it is clear that making phone calls had the highest percentage, while search the internet and record video had no figure in a particular year.
To begin, in 2006 search the internet and record video account for zero percent, while playing of music, playing of games and taking photos accounted for 12%,17% and 66% respectively. Furthermore, sending text messages generated 67% and on the other hand making of calls peaked the values 100%.
Consequently, in 2008 record video and search the internet saw an increase and generated 9% and 14% respectively. playing of music 18%, playing of games 42% and taking of photos accounted for 75%. Hence, sending of text messages was 89% while making of phone calls maintained it's value.
In 2010, record video had increased tremendously to 35%, while search the internet almost doubled its previous value. playing of music, playing of games, and taking of photos were 26%, 41%, and 76 % respectively. sending of text messages was 79%, meanwhile making of calls saw a reduction by 1%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Playing
... and generated 9% and 14% respectively. playing of music 18%, playing of games 42% and ...
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Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Playing
...rnet almost doubled its previous value. playing of music, playing of games, and taking ...
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Line 10, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sending
...s were 26%, 41%, and 76 % respectively. sending of text messages was 79%, meanwhile mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16243654822 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71601210658 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532994923858 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2229455191 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.7 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0464726392319 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019835087087 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327114556588 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344880595812 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431052824186 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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