Being ambitious is an important aspect in the existence of man. A soul without an ambition is heading to nowhere. It is thought by some that getting ambitious has a bad attribute in a person's character. I disagree to the afore mentioned.
Ambition is a drive that keeps one going. Most people get distracted by happenings, unnecessary activities as well as Influence from peer pressure. Furthermore, an ambitious individual keeps his eyes on the goal. He began to envision his destination. An hypothesis proven by one professor fasakin in 1990, hence, it revealed ambition to secret of successful business men in the states.
A goal is not in anyway a stain to an individuals character but rather a ginger to triger results. No matter how many times one fails, the goal keeps you up. It stand as a gear for more push in order to attain success. Some person's mistake ones ambitiousness for eagerness or respiration. It is rather a different word and meaning. 70% of ambitious men attain success just by rising and falling and still stay at the ladder of success. Unfortunately desperation causes a backward movement in the progress of man, after attainment. For instance, the fraudulent activities taking place on the internet. Those are repulsive desperation. Thereafter causing one to go back to zero.
To be ambitious is to be purposeful, and aiming at the right thing. For example, the owner of bizgen furniture, his purpose made his intentions a reality as you can see. We all are beneficiary of it.
It connects you to the right clique, and expands your horizons of knowledge and affluence.
In conclusion, ambition is not a negative attribute to an individuals character, but rather a drive that keeps one going, also a goal that triggers results, however aids in aiming at the right thing, as well as connecting one to the right clique and expanding our horizon of knowledge and affluence.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ting ambitious has a bad attribute in a persons character. I disagree to the afore ment...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'keep'?
Suggestion: keep
...e. Furthermore, an ambitious individual keeps his eyes on the goal. He began to envis...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
.... He began to envision his destination. An hypothesis proven by one professor fasa...
^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by one professor fasakin in 1990, hence, it revealed ambition to secret of succe...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne professor fasakin in 1990, hence, it revealed ambition to secret of successfu...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...ss men in the states. A goal is not in anyway a stain to an individuals character but...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... A goal is not in anyway a stain to an individuals character but rather a ginger to triger...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stands'?
Suggestion: stands
...es one fails, the goal keeps you up. It stand as a gear for more push in order to att...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...to attain success. Some persons mistake ones ambitiousness for eagerness or respirat...
^^^^
Line 5, column 635, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thereafter,
...ernet. Those are repulsive desperation. Thereafter causing one to go back to zero. To b...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ition is not a negative attribute to an individuals character, but rather a drive that keep...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95638629283 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97151521283 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7555552685 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2916666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04166666667 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141083032175 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340457354726 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413850862523 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728493581995 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391936561949 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ting ambitious has a bad attribute in a persons character. I disagree to the afore ment...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'keep'?
Suggestion: keep
...e. Furthermore, an ambitious individual keeps his eyes on the goal. He began to envis...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
.... He began to envision his destination. An hypothesis proven by one professor fasa...
^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by one professor fasakin in 1990, hence, it revealed ambition to secret of succe...
^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne professor fasakin in 1990, hence, it revealed ambition to secret of successfu...
^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...ss men in the states. A goal is not in anyway a stain to an individuals character but...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... A goal is not in anyway a stain to an individuals character but rather a ginger to triger...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stands'?
Suggestion: stands
...es one fails, the goal keeps you up. It stand as a gear for more push in order to att...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...to attain success. Some persons mistake ones ambitiousness for eagerness or respirat...
^^^^
Line 5, column 635, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thereafter,
...ernet. Those are repulsive desperation. Thereafter causing one to go back to zero. To b...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ition is not a negative attribute to an individuals character, but rather a drive that keep...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95638629283 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97151521283 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7555552685 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2916666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04166666667 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141083032175 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340457354726 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413850862523 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728493581995 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391936561949 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.