A mobile phone is an technological means that posseses different features and does a thousand and one roles. Admittedly, it is an important gadget in our life's as it helps with communication, entertainment, intellectual drillings, it can serve as a means of livelihood, on the other hand there are perceived drawbacks like addiction and theft.
To begin,the calling machine is a programmed one that has a programmer in it,it does commands given and allows for communication.
It's an important means of communication,it helps one get in touch with friends, family and workers, amazingly it is portable so you could carry it with you.
Furthermore, it serves as a means of entertainment, an individual could play music or watch videos on it. Interestingly, one can watch comics via this machine.
Another point is, it could serve as an intellectual drillings, due to the vast and ever improving technology there have been inventions of applications which one can have on our mobiles that helps keeps us intact and exercise our IQ.
On the other hand,having a mobile phone could make one an addict, individual will loose focus on other substantial things and focus on the phone, it prevent you from doing things then cause you to initiate a procrastinating habit.
Hence, it also allow people to go into thievery, everyone wants to have a calling machine, if there are no funds to purchase one, stealing becomes an option for such individuals.
In conclusion, mobile machines have benefits which are: for communication, a means of entertainment, intellectual drillings and drawbacks like addiction and thefts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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...housand and one roles. Admittedly, it is an important gadget in our lifes as it h...
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Suggestion: drilling
...t is, it could serve as an intellectual drillings, due to the vast and ever improving tec...
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Suggestion: lose
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...ntial things and focus on the phone, it prevent you from doing things then cause you to...
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Suggestion: allows
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24521072797 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24336687159 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6102380135 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100781603588 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426518124502 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488009590882 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457248980501 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489745496079 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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