Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience
It is undeniable that economic progress is paramount to every nation. While many authorities see it as a topmost priority, other people believe beyond economic progress, advancement in other aspect is equally important. This essay will address both sides of the argument, and provide explanation why I believe growth cutting across every other area is also very essential.
On the one hand, the economy of a country drives other aspects of development like industry , health etc. Officials who see economic progress as number one in their priority do so because when the economy flourishes, it indirectly reflect in every other quota. Although this requires conscious effort from those in power to make it work. For example, most of the developed countries of the world spend time building it's economy, bringing about obvious development in other sector.
On the other hand, other type of progress is important for a balanced economy. Proponent of this view believe if the government focus only it's economy, there is a tendency to pay less attention on other areas that matter on the welfare of it's masses. For example, poorly developed countries lag behind because despite obvious economic advancement, other areas haven't experienced such positive tide. In my opinion, every nation should grow in other dimensions as much as it's economy make progress as most countries are driven backward if they focus only on their economy and even suffer terrible feat.
In summary, although many government focus in bringing economic progress , other people believe experiencing growth in other areas as well is equally important. I support this latter view, as a balanced economy requires all round development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, for example, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31734317343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68001229209 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9888135988 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246203492521 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977285370332 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718168468788 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159765673726 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033816427955 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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