Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
remuneration is considered to be a determinant factor in choosing a work. I agree with the afore-mentioned as this essay will explore more on my stance.
one of the reasons why I agree with the above topic is because needs are met. An individual can't spending a lot of money to go to his place of duty and the expenditures are more than the income. payment is a major aspect when it comes to making a choice of job. For instance, a lady with a pay of 50 Naira and spends 40 Naira on transportation, such person can never be stable both psychologically and mentally. Hence, one has to balance all expenses and the job is not even catering for her needs. Another reason is, it helps to invest and save. when one's earnings are enough obviously he will plan for the future and do a lot of savings that can last him a life time. Furthermore, such person will apply for pension and even gets himself insured. today is certain, no one knows tomorrow. People determined their future from today. For example, Dangote had been investing from the pennies he achieved to the stage he is today.
On the other hand, one will say experience will go along way that money is not everything. If a person is to consider experience, the knowledge acquired can't put food on the table or make provisions for warmth and shelter. it will be pathetic to say from the little money earned, savings can not be made because such people don't have enough to eat talk less of to save.
To end, money is a keen factor to chosing a job opportunities because it helps to invest, save, and overall cater for expenses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Remuneration
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...y will explore more on my stance. one of the reasons why I agree with the abo...
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...ith the above topic is because needs are met. An individual cant spending a lot ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s because needs are met. An individual cant spending a lot of money to go to his p...
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...cause needs are met. An individual cant spending a lot of money to go to his pla...
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Suggestion: Payment
... expenditures are more than the income. payment is a major aspect when it comes to maki...
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.... For instance, a lady with a pay of 50 Naira and spends 40 Naira on transportation, ...
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...dy with a pay of 50 Naira and spends 40 Naira on transportation, such person can neve...
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...reason is, it helps to invest and save. when ones earnings are enough obviously he ...
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...n is, it helps to invest and save. when ones earnings are enough obviously he will ...
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... invest and save. when ones earnings are enough obviously he will plan for the fu...
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Suggestion: lifetime
...do a lot of savings that can last him a life time. Furthermore, such person will apply fo...
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Suggestion: Today
... pension and even gets himself insured. today is certain, no one knows tomorrow. Peop...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ider experience, the knowledge acquired cant put food on the table or make provision...
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...make provisions for warmth and shelter. it will be pathetic to say from the littl...
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...ke provisions for warmth and shelter. it will be pathetic to say from the little ...
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Suggestion: don't
...ngs can not be made because such people dont have enough to eat talk less of to save...
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...ave enough to eat talk less of to save. To end, money is a keen factor to chosin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50689655172 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63374470615 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8391268385 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8823529412 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100099752513 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331493856502 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378428047832 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705260102598 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202722021244 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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