Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give opinions.
In modern civilization, the issue of how gaining success influenced profoundly human lives has become a controversy among the younger generation and the older ones. It is supposed by some that hard-working and self-determination are two transparent elements to obtain success. While others claim that there involve alternative factors such as money and physical appearance for people to become successful as well. In general, some reasons behind these statements would be indicated clearly.
Initially, hard-working people are assumed to be successful to some extent. Taking office workers as an example, when considering the amount of time they work, eight hours and more will be their responses whether they are achievable. Hence, people believe that increasing the number of hours to work turns out to be boost productivity aligning with the chances to succeed potentially in the long run. Meanwhile, combining with a possibility such determination should be taken into account when reaching success in life. Particularly, businessmen are obligated to make a rational decision in which they can earn profit as well as their desirable goal. Thus, both two factors hard-working and self-determination are aiming to push more and more success for their life in the academic environment these days.
Notwithstanding, some likelihood should not be ignored as it brings in a multitude of benefits in some circumstances. First and foremost, people are radically conscious of the significance of money in reality in which they are obsessed with the idea of being successful. More specifically, money can be regarded as a valid investment for a project or even a business to succeed further in the future. Therefore, without the presence of this factor as a foundation, it is actually proven to be sophisticated to walk in a successful path at the early stages. Additionally, people also perceive that the external spheres, dominantly attractive appearance will determine whether they are straightforward to be successful or not. As a result, this platform depends thoroughly on multiple aspects both extrinsic and intrinsic environment.
All of this being illustrated, even though the importance of hard work and determination impacts on people’s success, money and appearance should not be underestimated when assessing the possible features of being successful in such a social hectic life. However, this personally depends on characteristics as well as the relationship network building in the long run of each individual.
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Suggestion:
...ing in the long run of each individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in general, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51413881748 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32825570447 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557840616967 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3262705523 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278749584712 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908849660115 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766293819617 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181125836969 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338312473365 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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