the percentage of spending and resource consumption in the world by different countries and the population distribution.

Essay topics:

the percentage of spending and resource consumption in the world by different countries and the population distribution.

The pie charts compare the percentage of spending and resource consumption in the world by different countries and the population distribution. The countries in comparison including Asia, Europe, America, and Africa.

Overall, though Asia is the largest continent in its population rate, the USA and Europe have taken the major proportion for the resources consumption. In the world, the highest expenses are for food compared to housing and transportation.

According to the data, the major part of the world's expense is for food and transportation accounts for 24%, and 18% respectively. Whereas the remaining 58% has divided for housing, clothing and other things, which accounts for 12%, 6%, and 40% respectively.

While Asia is the largest continent with 57% of people compared to the USA and Europe, the largest percentage of resource consumption has shared by these two continents at 60%, but only 40% of resources are taken up by the other countries. When Africa have 10% of inhabitants, Europe and America have a 14% population.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...have taken the major proportion for the resources consumption. In the world, the highest ...
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Line 13, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es. When Africa have 10% of inhabitants, Europe and America have a 14% population...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34337349398 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04369519138 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3686410379 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301660258944 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147016509899 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.241556978301 0.0843802449381 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21510187319 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.231153849434 0.0819641961636 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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