the percentage of tourists to England
The presented line chart illustrates the proportion of visitors to England coming to Brighton attractions, namely Art Gallery, Pavillion, Pier and Festival in 30 years.
It can be seen clearly that Pavillion is the place where it has the highest percentage of tourists coming; meanwhile, the lowest number belongs to Art Gallery.
In 1980, the number of visitors arriving at Pier and Art Gallery constituted 10% and 20%. After that, Art Gallery experienced a significant rise in the proportion of tourists coming, at nearly 40% while that of in Pier increased slightly from 10% to 15% in 1985. There were the slight drops of 20% and 10% respectively in the percentage of visitors to Art Gallery and Pier in 1990. The next 15 years, both had ups and downs in the tendency and cut each other at 15% in 2005. Then, the number of people visiting Art Gallery fell out under 10%, less than 10% in Pier.
The percentage of tourists who came to Pavillon stayed above 20%, less than 8% in Festival in 1980. They had the same proportion (nearly 30%) in 1985 and then, moving in the different ways. The percentage of people who joined in Pavillion reached at peak (approximately 50%) in 1995; whereas, Festival saw a decrease from 30% to 25% at the same time. In the last 15 years, the number of visitors coming to Festival was stable at 28% while that of in Pavillion reached its lowest level in 2010 at 30%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63709677419 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56436396384 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9179856723 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159192189297 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063831857752 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723036535839 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105795515634 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456739047733 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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