The given maps demonstrates what is like in the central area of a little town named Islip now and how this area will be upgraded in the future.
Regarding to the first map , there is a main road hooking up with shops and the park together, seperating the countryside school and the housing on each side.
As for the second one, a series of modifications will occur this little town. Obviously, bus station, shopping centre , car park and new housing are going to be grouped in the area where belonging to both country side coutryside. Besides , the main road usded to be between the shops is about to converted into pedestrians only .Futhermore, to promote the transportation of the town centre, the main road will be developed into the dual carrageway,which not only provides direct access for the new housing near the car park, but also cuirculates whole town centre. At last, the area of the park is planning to shrink dramatically for the places used for the new housing.
To sum up , although school and housing will stay unchanged after planned development , the other parts of this little town will be modified noticably.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he future. Regarding to the first map , there is a main road hooking up with sh...
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... Obviously, bus station, shopping centre , car park and new housing are going to ...
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... bus station, shopping centre , car park and new housing are going to be grouped ...
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...to both country side coutryside. Besides , the main road usded to be between the s...
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Suggestion: .
...about to converted into pedestrians only .Futhermore, to promote the transportati...
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Suggestion: Futhermore
...out to converted into pedestrians only .Futhermore, to promote the transportation of the ...
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Suggestion:
...ed into pedestrians only .Futhermore, to promote the transportation of the town c...
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Suggestion: , which
...ll be developed into the dual carrageway,which not only provides direct access for th...
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... into the dual carrageway,which not only provides direct access for the new housi...
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Suggestion: ,
... used for the new housing. To sum up , although school and housing will stay u...
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...stay unchanged after planned development , the other parts of this little town wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, as for, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84020618557 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74618403045 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8369596441 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981322244266 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589428710303 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683179190863 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483849021175 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498865752966 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.