The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in threecountries.

Essay topics:

The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three

countries.

The diagrams provided illustrate the information about the methods of three nations (the Republic of Korea, The United Kingdom and Sweden) deal with hazardous garbage.

At a glance, it is evident that the majority of methods utilized to dispose of the dangerous waste products is buried underground. Besides, Great britain is the sole country using chemical substances to dealt with the garbage.

In South Korea, more than two-thirds of hazardous waste is recycled, followed by 22% buried method. Also, just a small quantity of the waste is dealt with burning way. In contrast, 55% of Sweden's garbage is disposed of using the underground way, while two other methods (recycling and burning) shared almost similar figure (25% and 20% respectively).

Up to 82% of hazardous garbage in britain is disposed using the underground method, followed by chemical treatment and throwing to the sea as at the second place (8% each) and just 2% of the waste is dealt using incineration.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, second, so, third, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1572327044 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73041461268 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7337990628 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15159928044 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082904080777 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598466805259 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969458635606 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577409803852 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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