The given circular representation reveals the information about the amount of electricity produced by three different countries during the year 2009.The data is caliberated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Having a wuick glance upon the chart it is lucid that Germany has produced overall 560 billion kwh.It has produced more electricity from conventional thermal method and approximately 23.0/by nuclear sources moreover, 17.4percentum through renewables ,which is further divided into five subcategories.Furthermore the ratio of electricity generated by renewable sources such as biomass ,hydroelectric,solat ,wind and geothermal is 39.3:17.7:6.1:36.9:0.0 respectively
In contrast .france was more depended on nuclear sources as it has produced nore than 76.0/of electricity from the same.However all other sources were quite unpopular.Interestingly france was also not depended on geothermal energy like germany.Moreover hydroelectric power was also the most efficient source at80.5 percentile while energy produced by solar was merely 0.9/.Although biomass had contributed atnost 8.1/in the production of electricity.
Overall, it is evident that germany produced more electricity from conventional therm method whereas in france main source of electricity was nuclear plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37640449438 4.92477711251 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98553833804 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 343.100892191 43.030603864 797% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.333333333 112.824112599 335% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.3333333333 22.9334400587 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 5.23603664747 554% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210185708656 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145615474016 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408453489761 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130315001216 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392923561197 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 13.2329268293 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.25 61.2550243902 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 6.51609756098 312% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.3012195122 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 20.61 11.4140731707 181% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.06136585366 142% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 11.4329268293 293% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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