The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total.

The two pie charts illustrate the total proportion of the seven continents regarding the area and the existing population.

Overall, the most significant facts to emerge from the charts are that asia accounts for not only the largest population but also the largest continent in the world, compared to the other continents. On the other hand, the continents of oceania and antarctica take up the least land area and population in the world, respectively.

while asia is a continent constituting 30% of the world land area, over three-fifths of the world population living there, showing that it is the widest and over-populated continent in the world. The second-largest continent is Africa with 20% of the world land area in which 15% of the population of the world settling. The third-largest continent in the world is North america at 16% where includes 16% of the world population.

Whereas Europe constitutes just a seven-percent area of the world land, it accounts for nearly two times higher than that in the amount of population, representing one of the most densely populated areas in the world. while, however, 12 percent point of the world's land area belongs to South america, it includes just 5.5% of the world population. At last, antarctica and oceania with 9% and 6% of the world land have nearly zero percent of the world population, at 0% and 0.5%, respectively.

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Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, third, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96718346143 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.976600983 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.444444444 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226974885457 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126185584584 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995412931024 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191136841805 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101739607905 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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