Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the world in such economic turmoil, obtaining a prospect job seems to preoccupy students. After graduating from high school, young adults face difficult choices regarding whether going to university or entering the world of work. Consequently, the degree versus work continues to be rather controversial because the benefits are hard to quantify exactly. There are valid opinions on both sides which will be analyzed in this essay.
On the one hand, supporters of high education point to open-ended career opportunities. This is because, as a job hunter, having a university degree provides a person with great opportunities to access to a wide range of professions with special requirements which he or she already met them by acquiring job-related skills at the university. Furthermore, they highlight the chance that a university student may expand a whole range of skills, ranging from time management to soft and computer skills, maximizing opportunities to land highly paid occupations.
By contrast, those who supporters the option of joining the workforce as a viable and reliable route to embark on a highly lucrative career believe that this is a straightforward way to earn money. In other words, while going to college requires an avalanche of funds, including tuition fees and the cost of living, starting a job or serving an apprenticeship can make young people be independent and facilitate to reach such their personal goals as having a paid job, purchasing a house and a car, and forming a family in the filing. Another reason appears to be receiving valuable on-the-job experience. Whereas university study is primarily focused on education and research (i.e., a theory-based approach), gaining hands-on experience is brought by joining a career, making young job seekers have the practical skills required and appreciated in today's economy.
To conclude, it would appear to be advisable that the decision regarding whether to pursue education or set up a business should be based on personal preferences rather than on general view.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35889570552 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05257110847 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628834355828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6516993087 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168069039884 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510199579828 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308380426396 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815798682068 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490150872986 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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