The table shows the number of foreign visitors (in millions) to 7 countries.

Essay topics:

The table shows the number of foreign visitors (in millions) to 7 countries.

The table compares seven destination countries of foreign tourists regarding the number of visitors in total, from the UK, and form the USA.

Overall, it can be seen that France is the most popular destination from foreign visitors, especially for British people. On the other hand, the lowest-ranked countries are Australia and Ireland, respectively.

While France is mostly attracted by foreign visitors with 53 million, of which 7.4 and 0.1 million visitors come from the UK, which is the highest figure, and the USA, which is the lowest number, Australia with just 3 and Ireland with 4 million visitors are not favorite for visitors coming from foreign countries. The same numbers of visitors come to visit Australia form the UK and the USA, at 0.3 each. However, the statistics show that over half of the visitors come to see Ireland form the UK, at 2.4.

Italy and Canada are the second and the third countries in terms of attracting foreigners, with 20 and 15 million in total, of which 1.8 and 12 million were Americans and 1.2 and 0.6 were British, respectively, representing that Canada is the most popular country for American people. However, the numbers of visitors were almost the same for Mexico and Thailand, with 7 and 6 million in total, respectively. After Canada, Mexico is the destination for most Americans, at 5.5 million which accounts for over 80% of foreigners visiting the country of Mexico.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second, so, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2913.0 965.302439024 302% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.5543478261 4.92477711251 214% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 17.7381280354 2.65546596893 668% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 788.4 283.868780488 278% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.45097560976 200% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 410.417267343 43.030603864 954% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 485.5 112.824112599 430% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 22.9334400587 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775279373424 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939873381238 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558988476909 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697043578443 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509217747106 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.3 13.2329268293 388% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -85.19 61.2550243902 -139% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.6 10.3012195122 355% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 44.8 11.4140731707 392% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 39.5 11.4329268293 345% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 45.0 11.0658536585 407% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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