The chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking about their destinations for the period 1994-98.

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The chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking about their destinations for the period 1994-98.

The table gives data regarding the outcomes of a survey asking people's destination countries by main regions conducted in the UK between the years 1994 and 1998, in which 100,000 residents participated.

Overall, during the period of five years, the most visited region by UK residents was western Europe which was their most favorite area to travel. Similarly, the number of people visited the countries located in the area of Western Europe increased considerably compared to other destinations.

While 19,371 residents visited Western Europe in 1994, only 1,782 and 919 took a trip to other areas and North America, respectively. These figures increased slightly in the following year for each destination, followed by a relatively substantial increase for the rested of the period, reaching 24,519, 2,486, and 1,823 people visiting western European countries, other areas, and North America, respectively.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...garding the outcomes of a survey asking peoples destination countries by main regions c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, similarly, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64028776978 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83934879117 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3276663656 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.8 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168672457938 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890452179179 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745114434617 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126096988876 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746217055402 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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