The pie charts indicate data about the online purchasing sales for trade sections in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. According to the charts, there are 4 sections such as travel, film/music, books and clothes chapters. It is clear from the charts that online sales for travel and clothes sectors shrank significantly comparable to 2003. And sales for books and film/music sectors increased alarmingly in 2013, if we compare them to sales in 2003.
In the first place, all of the sectors are shown in the percentages. In 2003, the biggest percentage of online sales was belonged to the travel sector, while the lowest percentage was belonging to the books section(36% and 19% respectively). However, in 2013 the major percent of sales was regarded to the film/music zone and the minimal percentage of purchasings on the internet regarded to the clothes store(33% and 16% respectively). Secondly, in 2013, sales on the internet reduced dramatically from 24% to 16% and from 36% to 29% for the clothes and travel subdivisions appropriately comparable to 2003. In contrast, the amount of percentage of buyings inclined significantly from 21% to 33% and from 19% to 22% for the film/music and books chapters properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[2]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belonged'
Suggestion: belonged
...vel sector, while the lowest percentage was belonging to the books section36% and 19% respect...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...vel sector, while the lowest percentage was belonging to the books section36% and 19% respect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, while, in contrast, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08040201005 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92388911337 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3260862715 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228700556574 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116228764694 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100909574566 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206375361889 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887694863606 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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