The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are six pie charts illustrating the proportion of water consumed for three categories, namely industrial use, agricultural use, and domestic use, in six various parts of continents, including North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. As is shown by the charts, agricultural use accounts for the highest percentage in the areas mentioned above excluding Europe and North America.
A glance at the information provided reveals that the amount of water consumed for agriculture usage makes generally up for the high percentage. Of these parts of the globe, Central Asia consumes the highest proportion of water for the agriculture sector, constituting 88 per cent, whereas the percentage of water used for this purpose in Europe and North America is lower than the others, account respectively for 39 and 32%. In stark contrast, however, 84, 81 and 71 per cent of the amount of water consumed respectively in Africa, South East Asia, and South America are comprised of agriculture usage.
With regard to the charts supplied, by far the greatest proportion of water used for industrial sector, Europe consumes a staggering percentage, accounting for 53 per cent. Second in terms of this purpose is North America, standing at 48%. The percentage of water used for industrial usage in other areas of the world, meanwhile, constitutes beneath 13 per cent which Central Asia is the exclusive part uses the lowest percentage of water for this purpose, making up a mere 5%.
Looking at the information provided, we can obviously see that South America consumes the relatively highest proportion of water for domestic use, accounting for 19%, as opposed to the percentage of water used for this type makes up approximately under 10% in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. Conversely, European and North American residents consume large percentage of water for domestic usage, constituting respectively 15 and 13%.
It is interesting to note that consuming the lowest proportion of water for industrial and domestic usages, Central Asia uses the highest percentage of water for the agricultural sector. By the same token, the relatively high proportion of water used in Europe is comprised of industrial use.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'relatively the highest'.
Suggestion: relatively the highest
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...high proportion of water used in Europe is comprised of industrial use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, look, second, so, whereas, while, with regard to, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 965.302439024 196% => OK
No of words: 359.0 196.424390244 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27576601671 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88108476729 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431754874652 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 283.868780488 215% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9089302478 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.833333333 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252486952538 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12586258282 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056445962252 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18385505228 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276004014871 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.