Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Recycling domestic waste has been part and parcel of our lives. Although a certain group of people argue that the only way to encourage individuals to recycle household waste is that governments should introduce legislation, I do not concur with the idea that passing a law is the only way.
This law could persuade more and more householders to separate all waste into different bins. People, who fail to adhere to this law would be fined as a punishment or there would be prison sentences for repeat offenders. These measurements would act as a deterrent and encourage people to obey the recycling law.
However, governments should do more than simply introducing a recycling law. If governments make some educational programs for people, this will be effective. For instance, children could be thought about recycling at schools, and house owners could be informed about the environmental impacts of household waste. Additionally, more budgets would be allocated by governemtns to improving recycling facilities which would input materials in some way by separating mixed recyclables. Consequently, waste is processed more effectively, regardless of whether or not people separate it correctly at home.
To conclude, Although enforcing a law would be one way to influence people to dispose of their waste ,allocating budgets , educating children and informing householders about the effect on recycling waste could help tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04467544331 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6311831864 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299285398393 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126804896089 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560069519519 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19640619504 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476551600915 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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