Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We live in a world where the significance of the preservation of the environment has been growing in leaps and bounds ,and this had raised the question of whether individual people can play a part or it is the government and the private sector that can address the matter.it is felt that no matter how small the contribution of individuals cant be denied however the role of the latter group is still more significant.
On a national level, it is obvious that it is the government’s responsibility to salvage the natural surroundings .first of all ,governees pay taxes and expect their governors to allocate budgets to major environmental concerns. For instance , without government funding ,it would be impossible to separate and recycle waste released in the landfills.as well as monetary matters, what is important is that lawmakers contributing to a country’s government are the ones who pass laws and set fines to combat and curb those cutting down the trees and hunting rare species illegally .as long as logging and poaching are not vehemently faught,we will end up failing to preserve our flora and fauna .Finally and yet more importantly , presidents and ministers are expected by their nations to sign global treaties and seek help from international communities like the UN to address major concerns of the mother earth namely global warming ,climate change and carbon foot print.
Similarly , a lot of such responsibilities have been privatized in recent years .major non –governmental organizations have been making their contribution to this cause .these include either nonprofit and profit national NGOs like Go Green intending to combat overuse of plastic in New Zealand or UN environmental sub organizations which have been working in the area for years.
On the other hand, on an individual level what can be done to make a difference no matter how small compared to the former large-scale measures is make changes and modifications in lifestyles . in water use ,shorter showers could soon build up if done in masses .an other step to take is separation of wet and dry trash .as well as such household routines, once they are out on picnics ,people can make sure to kill the fire made out in the jungle or avoid littering there.
Having made these points , it can be concluded that it is not that individuals have no responsibility to take ,it is just that the role of governmental and privately-run organizations is so urgent and marked that makes individual steps pale into insignificance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, similarly, so, still, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07469879518 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1167712522 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607228915663 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.806598671 49.4020404114 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.857142857 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.2857142857 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152430432007 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773538310244 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481355807289 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847910692956 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403342459341 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 13.0946893788 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.