The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below illustrate the placement of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after rebuilding.
Overall, we can see at present the university sports center map that they haven’t a leisure pool, that they will build in the future plans. In contrast, to the present map, future maps will expand their territory.
On the one hand, to the west of the pool, we can see the changing rooms. Opposite to the changing room, we might see seating. To the south of the reception, we must look at the entrance. To the west and east of the sports center, we might see outdoor courts.
On the hand, according to the plan, the sports center will be extended their territory. In contrast to the present plan, they will be demolished outdoor courts, and to the east of seating, they will constructed a sports hall. Besides, to the west of changing they will be erected leisure pool. To the north-east of the sports hall, they will be added two dance studios. To the south of dance studios, they will introduced another changing room, and with changing room they will be constructed a café. To the south- east of the leisure pool, they will be built the third changing rooms with a sports shop.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... maps below illustrate the placement of a university's sports center now, an...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...door courts, and to the east of seating, they will constructed a sports hall. Bes...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'construct'
Suggestion: construct
... and to the east of seating, they will constructed a sports hall. Besides, to the west of ...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...st of seating, they will constructed a sports hall. Besides, to the west of changing ...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... leisure pool. To the north-east of the sports hall, they will be added two dance stud...
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Line 7, column 413, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'introduce'
Suggestion: introduce
...o the south of dance studios, they will introduced another changing room, and with changin...
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Line 7, column 503, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g room they will be constructed a café. To the south- east of the leisure pool, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, third, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 1.00243902439 1596% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68691588785 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54109812214 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415887850467 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 3.36585365854 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3952269688 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1538461538 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143324564358 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678830767831 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702968028348 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120616886516 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985119991693 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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