The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

Essay topics:

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The pictures depict an airport as it is at present, and how the same area will look in the future after having been developed.

In general, the area expected to experience drastic changes in facilities and transport systems. The most significant differences will be seen in the removal of walkaways and the construction of more facilities.

In terms of transformation in transport systems, there are 1 to 8 gates for walkaway is removed to make way for sky train, which includes 1 to 18 gates for passengers. Furthermore, another transformation will be seen in that car hire is built in the eastern of arrivals area with the purpose of to serve for users.

As far as developments in facilities are concerned, a Check-in counter located in the North-west is demolished to erect a bag drop. However, a cafe is relocated behind the bag drop and close to the entrance of departures, and then the check-in counter is constructed opposite the bag drop in the eastern. In addition, shops in the north of the security passport are erected to serve the passengers.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evelopments in facilities are concerned, a Check-in counter located in the North-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, then, in addition, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88397790055 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04023064098 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8062492976 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926579008499 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412016060531 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817695719968 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758981578064 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102973396586 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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