Print Media, including magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet use sources.
To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement
Nobody doubts that we live in a rapidly changing time. The technology of the past is being replaced every day, as seen in music recording, mapmaking, and many other areas. Print media is, of course, affected by this change, and many think that paper news sources will soon disappear. But while magazines and newspapers may become less popular, they will probably not vanish completely.
If there is a practical use for a product, then people will continue to buy it. Even though newspapers and magazines are often unnecessary, there are times when they can be useful, too. Many subway systems do not have mobile internet service, for example, and so passengers read newspapers instead of using their smartphones or computers. Similarly, many countries do not yet have widespread mobile internet access. It will be a long time before that changes, and until then, print media will continue to be useful.
Besides being practical, physical news sources are more enjoyable for some people. Reading from a screen can create stress, whereas reading from paper can be quite relaxing. Since we access internet news on the same devices we use for work and communication, phones and computers, we are often distracted by emails, text messages, and other responsibilities. Magazines and newspapers, meanwhile, offer an opportunity to escape from the stress of modern technology. This makes it difficult for internet news to totally replace print media.
As long as people want print media, news companies will continue to sell it. Although new technology might grow and physical copies might become less popular, we should not expect them to disappear. And as a newspaper reader, I, personally, take comfort in that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, I, personally, take comfort in that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, similarly, so, then, whereas, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23826714801 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72283548914 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4839443896 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3529411765 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236687290749 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740557449744 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602955601482 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136623209938 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496895421954 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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