Process chart

Essay topics:

Process chart

The process chart illustrates the information about how to pasteurized milk and how to make different products from milk such as cheese cream and butter. The process is very easy and indicates the key stages in the process.
Firstly, the cows are grazing on the field and take to the area where milking machine is placed. The milk is taken by milking machine twice day then milk is stored into refrigerator. In the third stage, milk tanker collect milk from refrigeration storage daily and delivered to daily for further process.
Secondly, at dairy, milk is used two ways some of the milk is pasteurized and packed in the bottles. Additionally, these bottles send to supermarket and shops for sale. However, some of the milk has been used to make cheese cream and butter all these products have been also sent for sale.
Overall, this process started with grazing and ends with milk and all this milk products have been sent to supermarket for customers. The process needs very less equipment.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...condly, at dairy, milk is used two ways some of the milk is pasteurized and packed in the b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...upermarket and shops for sale. However, some of the milk has been used to make cheese cream...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50339561783 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9265850036 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18594243052 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904292998801 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108252847901 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141768282026 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140925829075 0.0819641961636 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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