The process shows the commercial production of fresh orange juice and orange juice from concentrate

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The process shows the commercial production of fresh orange juice and orange juice from concentrate

The picture illustrates the stages of the production of fresh orange juice and orange juice from concentrate.

Overall, there are various steps in the whole orange juice production beginning with fresh orange and ending with the delivery of orange juice packages to customers.

The first step starts with fresh oranges being picked up and transported to the factory by containers. In there, these oranges are placed into the machine to wash before being extracted to give birth to fresh juice and the byproduct known as waste solid. While the former is continuously packed and transported to the shop to be ready for commercial, the latter is used as the food for animal in the farmland.

Meanwhile, to produce orange juice from concentrate, fresh juice is brought into the facility by the refrigerator truck. In there, the process of evaporation is carried out, removing water from the juice and turning it into concentrate juice. Afterwards, the water-extracted juice is poured into the can before being carried into the warehouse for storage purpose. To be sold in the general public, in the factory, water is added into the concentrate juice, then, last product fills up to the package and is ultimately transported to the shop.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 384, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... for storage purpose. To be sold in the general public, in the factory, water is added into th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14778325123 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74112148527 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512315270936 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2630604287 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.111111111 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482390126059 0.215688989381 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228652752865 0.103423049105 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182597726674 0.0843802449381 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368488614388 0.15604864568 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152696048022 0.0819641961636 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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