The process shows how plants create food

Essay topics:

The process shows how plants create food

The diagram shows the process by which plants are able to produce food

Plants require input from four different sources to produce the sugars that are needed. First, the roots absorb water. Added to this, the plant is able to convert sunlight into energy needed for the process to be able to take place. Additionally, carbon dioxide is taken from the atmosphere throught the leaves. Finally, the minerals which are extracted from the soil throught the roots.

When combined, these four factors allow the plant tp produce sugar, which is then converted into starch that is used for growth and repair of the plant. A byproduct of this process is the conversion of carbon dioxide to oxygen, which is released into the air.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... which plants are able to produce food Plants require input from four different...
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...cted from the soil throught the roots. When combined, these four factors allow ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 608.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94308943089 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24163311665 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 178.2 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6370539243 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210115589121 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812833881025 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971689805254 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206168705279 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145303153805 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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